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everything and nothing, infinity
cold hard silence, divinity
a space that is forsaken
a place where souls die
a place where hope is taken
where wretched memories lie
any dreams formed are broken
any fantasies are crushed
words are left unspoken
every thought is rushed
i remain here, where nothing is kind
sitting in fear, in the back of my mind
©2005-2010 ~Xeknar
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fear and discomfort sure seems to spawn from within ones self

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:iconlife-and-death:
the first two lines are great i usualy dislike rhyming poetry but this was goo

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"If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the result of a hundred battles. If you know yourself but not the enemy, for every victory gained you will also suffer a defeat." Sun Tzu
:iconhakucho:
A brilliant and thoughtful piece :) I like the opening liines of this poem, as well as how you used the sounding repetition of "ace" with "space" and "place". It begins with a rhyming couplet and ends iwht a rhyming couplet which is a nice effect.

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~The-Enishi-Club
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:iconnomad0279:
Simply brilliant!

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"What is wrong with our world is that love is in short supply."
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

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